|Reviews for Abandoned|
| KingsIndian 4/8/11 . chapter 1
That's very saddening, but it's beautiful :'( .
| Robert Izzo 4/8/11 . chapter 1
Your writing was very touching. Growing up in my life I felt as though I could relate to that bird. I would go into detail but this is a review, not a life story.
You write in a way that people can relate, and can understand what they main idea of the story is. I hope you continue to write more like this.
Side note: I could see you writing a very inspirational / emotional short, or long story. It would get a lot of publicity. Even this poem caught my attention.