Chap 106, Few lines down from the start it says ""Oh hell yes." Wally immediately agreed and spoke into hair Brendan's hair." Think ya meant "spoke into Brendan's hair." Keep up ze fine writing good sir!

Wolp

Near the start o this chap it says "Lev pulled over his head and folded it onto his lap." Not sure if I'm reading it wrong or something but I can't find what he pulled and folded. I'm assuming you meant shirt or bandages. I forgot what he was wearing... N'ewayz, Love the story

Yo! Just rereading your story and I noticed at the start it says 'The sound of six feet' when there are six people. I think you meant six pairs of feet or twelve feet.

Love the story!

Short chapters, but good story so far. Write more.

IT FLOATS! Hooray! And I somehow expected them to be that crazy back in the day. . .

Is it possible for Ru to give me driving lessons? 3

So in between chapter 37 and 38 Abel learned all of their names seeing as he knows 'Solo's' already without being introduced within the chapters. (I sort of like spotting these kinds of things... now moving on to the next chapter...)

I need to see more of these Logic arguments. They're hilarious!

LOL! His blue hair keeps attracting attention! First people wanted to know what hair dye he uses and this guy thinks it's a desease or something. I'm loving this story!

LOL! I was crying at the end of this chapter it was so freaking funny!

I began reading this only because I saw the word 'random' in the reviews and now I just realised how long it is... I guess I'm reading it all, the napkin map was awesome (I laugh everytime it's mentioned)... I will check out the website too but I suck with forums.

Hi! SkyOnFire here, and I'm loving this story. It's so full of life and it makes me laugh or fall out of my chair from fright or sit with my nose inches from the screen at the action parts.

Please write more! Noka is awesome and relatable and again, I love it.

I'm new to FictionPress and I kinda want to have a friend or someone who can give me advice, maybe review my (one) story...?

Please reply! I'd love to talk to you and here from you!

SOF

Well. . . I can't say I'm surprised that Az is called Chef-person. I mean who else does the fucking cooking around there?

Oh Giroux, you old softie. . .

And Again they never cease to amaze me. . .

It's so good... But so many chapters to go!