I began reading this only because I saw the word 'random' in the reviews and now I just realised how long it is... I guess I'm reading it all, the napkin map was awesome (I laugh everytime it's mentioned)... I will check out the website too but I suck with forums.

Hi! SkyOnFire here, and I'm loving this story. It's so full of life and it makes me laugh or fall out of my chair from fright or sit with my nose inches from the screen at the action parts.

Please write more! Noka is awesome and relatable and again, I love it.

I'm new to FictionPress and I kinda want to have a friend or someone who can give me advice, maybe review my (one) story...?

Please reply! I'd love to talk to you and here from you!

SOF

Well. . . I can't say I'm surprised that Az is called Chef-person. I mean who else does the fucking cooking around there?

Oh Giroux, you old softie. . .

And Again they never cease to amaze me. . .

It's so good... But so many chapters to go!

But I think the communicators are pretty cool. . .

Oh Elli, you so silly XD

If this was a TV series then I would punch the screen for such a breath-holding cliffhanger.

Excellent as usual. . .

'I think it stopped'... you were wrong...

Well, that is just sad. I was hoping that they would get to meet some "regular" guldie Vets

I AM BACK! And poor poor Cait, he should learn to never ever stop a girl like Cor from using him however she wishes, it never end well. I know from experience. . .

MAN you're good at dialogue.

Typical Diresoldier, using his magic power to charge dead remotes. . . Why haven't I thought of that?

Well, they never cease to amaze me with their total idiocy. . .

FUCKING 'MAZING, all needed that is needed to be said. Also it is amazingly that random and i hope it stays that way