I'm really really sad for what happened to you, really, you are my favorite i've been following you since 2008, NO ONE has right to do what they did to you!, but i'm really glad that you found a new page.. i'm following you there! :D

Sorry about wat happened nd im glad u got ur stories back...Good Luck

and dont stop writing [i dont mean on the site] :) just keep it up in general because ur a good writer :)

-Raya47
P.S-if ur every bored jus pm me/i get kind of bored up here sometimes

I'm so sorry someone stole your stories! But how will you let us knowif you post somewhere else because I would love to see what happens with this story

Hey! I hope you're looking into posting on livejournal at The Write Away! I've been a member for 6 months although TWA has been running for a long while! You may have heard of some other great writers like candid, myrika, simonexsays, angels and effects, etc. those writers have a sister site to TWA called Plagiarism Haven. And while PH has limited authors, TWA does not! If you're a member of the community, you can post your work! And the mods on both sites are extremely harsh on the plagiarism issue, so both places are havens for those who have been betrayed in the past.

Please think of joining The Write Away! There are some really amazing authors over there, and we could definitely use another!

Good luck regardless!
Flashofquiksilver (on LJ I'm equicanine)!

I really liked this story, especially how it ended without any untoward drama. Grace and Matt are adorable 3

Ri

Hmm...I don't know why I'm getting the feeling that the guy is Glenn Johnson

i am sort of sad that the story ended and i was just able to get around to it now [ but im prtty excited abut this story you are writting now ]

i am happy that everyhting worked out in the story and that they got married! ]

sick bastard indeed but the accomplice who is it? man its killing me here! but on the bright side this is almost over and matt and her could get it on! XD like as in a relationship you nasties!;] lol

i love the chief's wife!

""Can I get you anything to drink or eat? I made cookies earlier. Mrs. Fletcher doesn't have to know you had one."

The older man smiled. "She would know. I don't know how she does it, but she always knows when I'm being bad. Thank you for the offer though.""

i love that scene! well that exchange of words because its soo funny! hahahahha

omg i want to hear what that bastard has to say asshole grrr he makes me so mad! but then again if he didnt exist neither would the story so he had to do what he did. man i have to go to work in like 20 min n im still in pjs but man the story is at climax ugh i dont want to work as of now ahhahahaha

such a long time! feels good to be reding your story again ]

so it is the janitor? makes sense since it was on school grounds but who is the acomplice? i still think that it has something to do with mitch to some etent i mean he is a cop so he would have inside info on all of them...

In the beginning chapter- the first- you mentioned hat she's eight months pregnant. Forgive me if I'm wrong, but if she is one month away from giving birth to her child, shouldn't she be resting instead of standing up in- in pumps 0.?- and going to work?

Don't pregnant women get three months off of work, because they begin to gain weight in their third trimester and cannot stand with so much weight pressing down on their feet?

-.- me thinks you should change the trimester that she's in!

I think that this meeting that you showed us was kind of pointless -.- You could have easily summed it up in two paragpraphs.

Eg: Matt sighed, running a hand through his hair he shook his head. The meeting... Blah bla blah.

But your style is different to mine, so I wouldn't expect you to do that.

The stories interesting ;)

Awkward sentence:

"Damn it," he muttered. "Someone's coming this way and he has a gun." He sighed. "My knife is no match for his gun. I'm going to have to leave you, Grace, but this isn't over. You and your baby are going to die. I will finish this when the time is right. I'll be seeing you soon." He released her and ran off into the night. Free, Grace tried to move and groaned when her body protested.

I just read all of this and loved it! Perfect mix of suspense and that sweet romance that you seem to write so well. Great job! :)

Awesome story! Really unbelievable. You have a gift with words. Have you ever thought about publishing this story?