|Reviews for Ei|
| sweenytodd 4/25/13 . chapter 2
All romance is the best romance.
| sweenytodd 4/25/13 . chapter 1
I happen to love stories like this one. :) I am new to the scene so I have a lot to read! yay!
| phoenixlight 4/24/13 . chapter 23
I really liked this story... no love em
| ImmanenceEnsured 4/12/13 . chapter 23
cute and hot
I liked everyone, the main characters and the friends, even the weird church group. This story really is a very satisfying read.
| ImmanenceEnsured 4/12/13 . chapter 22
I feel weird because everything turned out okay, and it was nice, but I think I miss some sincerity in Sky's reaction? He's been hurting Ethan all this time, yet all he can do after discovering the truth is act snarky and hunt Ethan down demanding an explanation. I feel like this emotional balance you so carefully built up was just broken by Sky's lack of affection. Although I more than appreciate the non-cheesiness of these latest chapters, and the fact that their little arguments do continue despite all the revelations, which keeps the story realistic, I miss all the fluffy fluff Sky had for Ei. It's like Ei's suddenly disappeared. I feel Ethan should turn into Ei, not the other way around. Because the jerk Ethan is just a front, right? To me it now feels as if the whole Ei business is erased.
| ImmanenceEnsured 4/12/13 . chapter 13
I really like this so far, it's slow and sweet and lovely, and I know I'm going to like the ending no matter how it turns out, because I'm more than convinced Ethan is Ei (although I could still be wrong, but common!) but one thing frightens me;
Sky is a pretty well-rounded, nice and considerate character, but I'm worried about Ethan. He's literally betraying Sky's trust by acting like a totally different person. I understand it's angst and macho-behaviour, but why keep it up - beside the logical plot point - why not try to change, gradually, for Sky's sake? Makes him look seem a childish person with a lack of insight. I still like him the best though, because he's the lovely tsundere all fangirls dream about. This story is so incredibly adorable.
| edowayne 4/7/13 . chapter 23
I really like how you made it seem so real! And if it is real, kudos to Ethan!
| Hey Romeo 2/8/13 . chapter 1
Oh, this sounds so interesting! I loved the ending of the Prologue!
| Guest 1/26/13 . chapter 22
I loved this! Left me all happy. Just what I like.
| mangatake 1/11/13 . chapter 23
Cute :) Loved this, thanks for sharing.
| Veneya 12/20/12 . chapter 23
i thought i had it figured it was ethan from the first chapter but then you had the adrian episode on the second chapter which made me rethink.
I loved ethan's character more than skylar's - and the happy ending too:D
| creativesmarts 11/23/12 . chapter 23
I loved this story:)
| Guest 8/31/12 . chapter 23
Nice story! I enjoyed it, and the mysterious premise was cool. I liked the way you wrote it so that it was possible to figure out who Ei was, but it wasn't entirely clear-cut until about half way through. I was a little disappointed with the brevity of ending; I would have liked to see/learned more about Ethan's feelings and thoughts after Sky's fried-rice peace offering, and I'm wondering exactly what made him change his mind again. But overall, I liked it! Your style is simple and elegant; not bogged down by too much description or dramatic text. I find that it's hard to write with your style properly (most people I find with a similar style end up with a piece turning out bare or incomplete), but you do it well. I enjoyed it )
| Anonymous 6/2/12 . chapter 23
I enjoyed this story much more than I had expected to. There were, however, more misspellings than I had expected of you, Ms. Marr.
| XRavenousVampiresX 5/11/12 . chapter 1
Already love it, and it's the first chapter! xD