|Reviews for Spring|
| deadkitty1 3/7/12 . chapter 1
Aw! It's such an adorably cute story! Love it! I did notice some mistakes:
"wait," said Marc. /Wait/
His dark hair was combed back in a way that made her want to run her hands through it, in a way that would effectively ruin all the time he had spent on it. - You said "in a way' twice. Unless you meant to say it then ignore me.
I like the imagery you captured when her heart burst in love; with water streaming through her entire body. Is it love, right? Or happiness. Some kind of emotion.
| Drops of Jewpiter 4/15/11 . chapter 1
| Hannah D 4/14/11 . chapter 1
this is SO cute :) i love the insecurity in Marc, not that its good to be insecure but boys who are, are really adorable :) this is amazing :)