I like how you connected the two ides of memories and electronic pictures. It worked really well together and it was a new twist on memories as photographs which is something that has been written about a lot. I think you carried the computer theme throughout really well.

I also liked the ending. It was really powerful though not 100% related to the theme.

The only thing is some of the line breaks seemed a little awkward like "memory/cards" and "delete/permanently." That was the one thing I didn't like.

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you're such a beautiful writer! i relate to this poem quite well even though i'm not quite sure what it's about; then again, i suppose only the writer of a poem can really know what the meaning of it is. great job!:)