|Reviews for ocean|
| synesthesiac 6/27/11 . chapter 1
I love this, the last line in particular is stunning.
| Nahaylem 4/22/11 . chapter 1
Well done. I enjoyed the ending very much. The beginning was a little odd, the two suffering together when only one needed to. Good job on the rest though.
| cab fed hig 4/22/11 . chapter 1
"and if you're afraid to let go, or
afraid to hold on any longer" - an interesting twist on their actions.
"As you quietly stare out into the vast
nothingness, coated in blue" - my favorite lines. so deep and dreamlike.
"I want to be the ocean to you." - beautiful.