Cool. It's effective and creepy. I like it!

Very cool. I love it when people write through the eyes of the killer. It doesn't happen ofter (not this well anyway). I did it with my story To Whom it May Concern, and it's always fascinating to read other people's ideas with this perspective.

Great job! Keep it up.

Wow, so dark...I was captivated. Very nicely written, simple, not too detailed, but enough of an explanation to understand what was happening, what had happened, and the emotions. Utterly fascinating, well done!

I would also like to congratulate you on your summary, I was instantly drawn in by that one simple sentence.

Frenchy x