i can't tell you how many times i've gone through this exact thing.

wonderful wording, wonderful poetry.

(i especially love "screaming

(STOPSTOPSTOP)

go further" - i won't forget those words for a long while.)

It was very interesting. It seemed like a poem and not a poem at the same time, like a story. I enjoyed how what was said in the parenthesis really made the poem special. It seems like we see into your mind when you write inside those parenthesis and you are narrating everything else. I really enjoyed it. Good job.

Keep writing!