I have no idea what the message in this is, but I thought it sounded really cool when I read it. Given that I need most things explained to me, I'm probably not the best person to judge though, and I kind of like the fact that it seems like it could be interpreted in a lot of different ways.

These were my favorite lines, so epic!:

"Your eyes are

windows to the soul, mine

are the pathways to God. "

Brilliant work!