|Reviews for Lots of Thoughts|
| A Fire Rose 8/27/11 . chapter 1
Very relatable poem! I still believe a set rhythm would improve your work in general, but I enjoy it. I'm sorry this review is not terribly comprehensive, but feel free to contact me if you have questions. And, although I'm not sure you intended it, you had a pretty cool rhythm with a few of the lines-
"my every selfish whim
and the deeper, philosophical meaning
of everything I take in."