woah o.o for being in third grade you knew how to spell and put together your words and sentences and make sense haha i'm 17 and have such a hard time with putting my thoughts together and finding the right words :P great job. you should try rewriting it :D making it longer?

I loved it! While the technique hadn't quite developed yet, the imagination is wickedly beautiful. I'm actually surprised there were no negative repercussions from your school for this. I was forced to do 6 sessions with a child psychologist for a halloween story that was a little too graphic.

Anyway, I'm happy you were able to share this little gem.

You had a wild imagination when you were in third grade... ;)