I LOVE this story - the drama is good enough for me, so please please DON'T kill off any protagonists in the end. Devon is cute and Steve is behaving a bit mean - although I can understand him. Anyway, this true love thing is great - so a happy ending would be nice for this one. ;)

No! Damn, I wanted to read the secret! Ahh... please please please update asap!

Excitement! Yay!

He's already turning into a jerk. Geez!

Ohhh drama!

I like this story. Sorry that the review was so far into the story though. I didn't know what to say at first.

Haha :) Nice job!

Whoa this story is good! I like it.

Their little affair, romance thing they have going on is very cute. I love it!

Good story! Update soon!

Okay, I would have reviewed each chapter, buut when your soo into a story you forget about reviewing and read like crazy, that's what happened with me so too make a long 'review' short I love your story it's very unique. I did think the twist with Steve showing up might have come a little too quick but it's your story and there might have been a reason it happened in the first place.I like the story it has great potential and i can't wait too read more so update soon!

You'll be amazed how patient we readers are. Don't panic :P

okay, so i know im supposed to just review the chapter or whatever... but i just wanted to do a kind of overall thing.

so, i really like this story and i sooo can not wait to read the rest. and mostly, you just have some editing/proofreading things throughout. but the writing and the story is really good. i like it a lot. keep going. i hope it gets published some day! :)

love this! post more soon!

this better not be it. I want more.

more more more more more.

Drops of Jewpiter: Yeah, I actually have like 11 chapters typed... almost 20 written but the 2nd chapter needs a LOT of work, idk when it'll be up... Probably tomorrow

intense! can't wait for more!