I came across this and it made me smile-not from happiness, really, but from satisfaction. This poem is really well-crafted, and it's a perfect length-long enough to have substance, but short enough to pack a punch.

You by no means have to try this, but what if you switched around the last two lines, so it read, "and a speck of indigo dust/ mixed in."? Just a thought...

Oh this is great! I know someone who I can relate this to. Write on.

Anna _