This is pretty good, a solid concept to write on. But reek is spelled with two e's, not an a. That's the only mistake I think I saw. ;-) Keep writing!

Much Love,

*K's Moonshadow*

that is soo true! i love it. boys always think they are better. well, they need to see the truth.

yeah,cool poem.Girl power!!

Not bad. I fully agree with you. Boys these days think we're pathetic little ** who need a guy to stick up for them. Well they are wrong! You know it, I know it, all chicks know it am I right?

hehehe right on!!! That sounds like a cheer! Could I use that for camp?! lol, nah... ^_^ Very fun poem, I really enjoyed reading it!

Yeah a total girl poem! you rock!

whoohoo! great poem.