Okay so I dislike the names immensely but I REALLY like this.

Now even I'M getting a tad annoyed with the pointless reviews. BUT THEY WILL CONTINUE TO COME.

Hi. I wasn't gonna leave a review since I didn't finish the story (but since you really want one I'll give it to you.) Anyway, I just kinda lost interest after the first few lines.. I don't know why, I'm sorry. :(

To be honest with you, I passed over this story several times because of your summary. I supposed that if you didn't care about your story enough to sell it, why should I bother to read it.

It is a nice story and worth the read. You should really change the summary so that people will give it a chance.

-LFU

first of all, i dont know why, but i really like the name Fitz. second of all, your writing is awesome, and you should def continue!