hiiii, i love this story for so many reasons! i think you write really well and clearly.

i love alex :) he makes me laugh. i would love to see him actually get jealous!

nate seems alright...for a friend...i hope he doesn't turn into a villain!

this liz secret though...actually puzzled. unless she did something corrupt for the school council? but i guess that's a good thing, because it's unpredictable!

I think this is a really good story, but something that stands out to me is that you seem like you're just spitting out sentences, not completely making them fluent. It's good and all, you're just stating. You're telling, not showing.

Haha I love the plot of this story! Pretty sure Alex likes Adie and I SO want then together! Forget Nate. And what's with the tension between those guys? I wanna know! Update!

hey i think it was a gud chapter...it shows the possibilty of alex not being so bad without revealing too much...now i cant wait for the nxt one:D...bt I think maybe you could include more alex - adie interaction in the nxt chap to make it more fun. i kinda want more of alex:)))

I am actual starting to really like Alex. I hope she ends up with him. Can't wait for the next chapter!

hmmm, it seems like Nate may have a thing for Adie ;D

And Alex, he so secretly wants her ;)

great chapter, it was wonderful -

thank you for updating so soon (:

mike is rooting for her? ok.. this is a little weird. i mean... he goes to her and tell her the story f how good alex is, buy her an ice cream and then tell her it's safe because if not alex would kill him, but then... he say he is rooting for her... wouldn't that make alex want to kill him?

and yvonne... she is quite a character. she acts like her gf, probably she wouldn't mind being, but seems not like she is her ex and all overprotective... maybe jsut her bff that wants him but never get him.. oh nate cousin.. and nate hates him for that because she is always following him... i thought she might be her sister.. alex's... but she isn't..

and what's going on with liz!

ohhh and what will alex do know that yvonne's knows addies his maid?

-M

There was a lot of tension in the room with Andie I have to wonder though how there past intertwines with one another please update I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH

An interesting chapter. It seems that perhaps the hidden truth is that Alex likes Adie and is attempting to shield her from Nate, who is a wolf in sheep's clothing... am I correct?

I continue to enjoy your story and your character development.

LFU

hey this is awesome...plz post the nxt chapter soon!

This story seems to be very promising. I wonder if Jill totally does not know the locker number or she just intentionally make it wrong. But I guess whoever the guy is would make a perfect pair with Adie. Plus, I bet Liz and Nate fit more for each other.

oh god, they are step brothers? hahaha i'll guess i'll find out :P

i wonder why alex is so pissed... :P

-M

alex is being a d!ck againnnnnnnnnnnn D;

i feel so bad for adrianne lol. if there was a guy like that at my school he would be 6 feet under :p

great chapter, i loved it(:

update soooooonn :D

I've been checking everyday to see if this story has been updated. I couldn't believe it when I saw it had.

I can't believe Nate is such a player. How can someone be that sweet and still be a player? I understand why Adie likes him.

But I want Adie and Alex to end up together.

Does Alex have a crush on Adie? Because Blue and Mike with their double meanings make it seem like he does.

Maybe that's why he's doing this? I hope so. Because his current attitude is annoying.

Anyway, great chapter. :) And update soon.

Well I hope I can soon! So Alex and Nate know it each other, I wonder how? And aw! Nate was so nice to her...update soon please!