|Reviews for Exhausted|
| YasuRan 5/15/11 . chapter 1
I like the imagery of an old battered body who relies on a cane to get around. It can symbolize many situations. The use of second-person POV draws the reader in nicely and helps me identify with what the narrator's going through. I also like how the narrator seems to sink in despair as seen through the descriptions of her weakening body and lungs. Again, great imagery. Ending the poem with a question adds to the desperate tone. In an odd way, it works that there is no closure for the narrator since it has the reader wondering what happens next.
| BedHead-RedHead 5/3/11 . chapter 1
powerful stuff! love the imagery of the walking stick and the exhausting path going up that unclimbable mountain...It really spoke to me!
| Leaving Pieces Behind 5/3/11 . chapter 1
I like this. I like the question at the end. I think it really speaks for the whole poem in itself :D