|Reviews for Won't Be Long|
| Abhyank 7/8/11 . chapter 1
Time and Love leave each other be,
Although we dance from time to time you see
But when it comes to saving a heart
Time and Love know it's time to part.
Liked this line really well! But at times in the end the poem depicted the irony one side being time saying:
"I will keep this waiting for you,
Until that day when you find love true."
but soon time also said "It won't be long until you're dead"
it was quite interesting :P
| ocii 5/5/11 . chapter 1
Hey! It's been a while!
This poem is amazing. It's flow-y and rhyme-y and a bunch of other things I can't really put into English. (I'm not just saying that.) The only thing I'd do different is change some words and wordings around in a couple spots to match the rhythm better, but I really love it. Good job!