Time and Love leave each other be,

Although we dance from time to time you see

But when it comes to saving a heart

Time and Love know it's time to part.

Liked this line really well! But at times in the end the poem depicted the irony one side being time saying:

"I will keep this waiting for you,

Until that day when you find love true."

but soon time also said "It won't be long until you're dead"

it was quite interesting :P

Hey! It's been a while!

This poem is amazing. It's flow-y and rhyme-y and a bunch of other things I can't really put into English. (I'm not just saying that.) The only thing I'd do different is change some words and wordings around in a couple spots to match the rhythm better, but I really love it. Good job!

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Me