I love the wording and the eomtions in this poem. Although I don't understand all of it, it's very beautiful. :)

Hmm I really like it, very unique :)

I really enjoyes this poem. It made my mind travel along to different places and I enjoyed the view. Your writing is very exceptional and I enjoy that it's clean.

My favorite part was when you put down that your hamdter was drunk. Metaphorical or not I got a picture of a drunk hamster stumbling around his cage holding a bottle and slurring his squeaks. I think that would be very humorous to watch. I also enjoyed when you were talking about the mortal combat scene. Although smashing a sub sandwich into her face isn't the ultimate revenge I'm sure it was just as riveting.

I write poetry like this, too. Probably not as long or visual but it's still poetry all the same. Anyway I enjoyed reading this. You are an exceptional writer. Don't stop writing.