|Reviews for Starving Girl Rant|
| one bullet and a heartache 5/5/11 . chapter 1
I love the wording and the eomtions in this poem. Although I don't understand all of it, it's very beautiful. :)
| Preistess-of-the-Moon 5/4/11 . chapter 1
Hmm I really like it, very unique :)
| RadioHasNoFuture 5/4/11 . chapter 1
I really enjoyes this poem. It made my mind travel along to different places and I enjoyed the view. Your writing is very exceptional and I enjoy that it's clean.
My favorite part was when you put down that your hamdter was drunk. Metaphorical or not I got a picture of a drunk hamster stumbling around his cage holding a bottle and slurring his squeaks. I think that would be very humorous to watch. I also enjoyed when you were talking about the mortal combat scene. Although smashing a sub sandwich into her face isn't the ultimate revenge I'm sure it was just as riveting.
I write poetry like this, too. Probably not as long or visual but it's still poetry all the same. Anyway I enjoyed reading this. You are an exceptional writer. Don't stop writing.