I LOVE THIS.
it's so sad.
But i couldn't stop reading onward.
Keep writing!
:)

I must admit, I was a little confused by the summary, but at my girlfriend's insistence, I decided to read this and it actually made sense and I enjoyed it a lot. The imagery was beautiful. Some deep stuff right there! Great job! :3

You, my friend, are on a fast track to becoming my new favourite writer. This sentence in particular is spectacular: "I dry my raining eyes that fall upon a dead garden as my mind takes me to another time, another place, where an old man shares a bed with a stranger named Air, and he doesn't like her; he'd rather have an angel in his bed, instead."

Beautiful and far too true.