Beautiful. Utterly Astounding! Wonderful descriptiveness.

WOW, really deep stuff here. I like it. I always like deep metaphors.

Magic! Absolutely magic! Literally, it describes painting perfectly with fantastic imagery 'He tugs down a corner of the sky-' was a great metaphor.

Also, your description at the bottom of the page was perfect because I re-read the poem and became further in love with it when I saw what you were trying to (and do so successfully) accomplish.

This poem was one o the best I've ever read. You have a gift.