|Reviews for Find Me|
| Curlysquirt95 5/23/11 . chapter 23
Yep, trouble's 'abrewing! :) Haha, great chapter. I love how silly and 'innocent' Juni tries to be. We all know he realizes the affect his has on Amelia. :)
| chewychester 5/23/11 . chapter 23
Flutter, flutter, flutter :D
| Curlysquirt95 5/22/11 . chapter 22
Uh-oh. Juni at Amelia's house? That's just asking for trouble. I have a feeling that some boundaries are going to be broken...Let's hope that Amelia's ready for it. :)
| chewychester 5/21/11 . chapter 21
Sounds like really apinful memories, are they from real life?
| Curlysquirt95 5/21/11 . chapter 21
Wow, this was an excellent chapter. :) You finally revealed her ex's name. I understand that Amelia doesn't want to get hurt again with Juni, but...She should just try to make their 'friendship' more than that. I mean, she's not always going to find a great guy like him, she should take advantage of it. If she doesn't, then she'll regret the things she didn't do, rather than the things she did. Nice writing, please update soon! :)
| OnceUponaStory 5/21/11 . chapter 18
Awww, this chapter was adorable! I love the banter between the two... riding the buses...what a fun idea. So, cute!
| OnceUponaStory 5/16/11 . chapter 16
How wonderful that Fictionpress allowed you to update. Lol. Technology...I have such a love/hate relationship with it. What a sweet guy! Texting her, buying her books...so cute! What got you interested in Asian culture? You definitely have a passion for it. Although, I'm enjoying her perspective...more detail in their surroundings (the smells, the people around them, even just the buildings) would help make the story seem a little more real. This is just a suggestion, and it's your story...so please feel free to do as you like. :)
| HopelessFeathers 5/10/11 . chapter 10
I was meaning to give you a reply earlier this morning but since I was on the school's laptop didn't want anyone following me...
Anyways, love your story.
Gonna be truthful and tell you that I laughed out loud in class today when I realized that he was younger.
This is kind of cute, a good take, I haven't read one of these in a while...
Just a note on the last flashback bit...it'd be better if you used past tense just to clear things up.
Well, keep writing. Can't wait :)
| OnceUponaStory 5/10/11 . chapter 9
This is so sweet! It's different than anything I've read, but in a cool way. Instead of focusing just on details, it feels almost like I'm inside her head. Not sure how I feel about the 21 vs. 29 thing...but it could work. Would you mind posting the translation for the Japanese words at the end? I love languages, and would like to know what they mean. Thanks!
| Yalina 5/9/11 . chapter 3
I liked it.
| Rynx-too-genki 5/9/11 . chapter 3
Cute story. its going a little slowly though.