That. Was. Great! I was biting my lip to keep from releasing some of my anxiousness that Juni's anger stirred inside me. But I couldn't help but laugh when Amelia told Henry OFF. When Henry was like, "This isn't over!" I was thinking, "Shut up, you loser! Amelia DOESN'T WANT YOU!" I hope they can work it out. I hope that Juni can tell her everything. I want them to be able to talk about it...What will they do? Juni...oh, Juni...please fix this...

Until next chapter, Mere Nova. :)

With Love,

Caitlyn

that was tense! i was freaking out because i really thought juni and Amelia were over and i almost started crying because i felt so sad because i totally thought amelia beleived henry. But i'm so happy she didn't but that part realy did shock me but in a good way. hmmm and now i'm wondering more about juni's past and what will happen with juni and Amelia's relationship. . . hmmm. please update soon! i can't wait to see what happens! btw great chapter i really enjoyed it.

That was great! And sad. You were right. I HATE HENRY EVEN MORE! if that's even possible. I'm looking forward to Juni's interlude. Sounds like it's definitely going to be...interesting...oh poor Amelia! :(

Until the next chapter!

With Love,

Caitlyn

whoa! wait but it's not true right? i mean the pictures have to be old right? lol well of course. becuase i really don't think juni would do that to her. gosh tho henry is such a butt face! please update soon because i'm dying to see what happens next! :)

i like this well other than henry! thats ok it took a little while to update lol at first i thought maybe something super bad had happen or you weren't going to write the story anymore.

So what are these pictures? IS he a porn star? Lucky girl. heehee Does he post on the internet? She knows he has been with other women, so what? I'm not upset yet.

i wasn't exactly sure what to expect when i clicked on the story...and to be quite honest the short chapters didn't thrill me very much...after all, as we all know those kinds of stories are never any good...but you've proved me wrong and i have indeed quite enjoyed this and can't wait for the next update! it's also nice to find an author who can impart the japanese culture a bit more accurately than most so for that i congratulate you!

otsukare mere nova-san! :)

That was a great chapter. Sorry I didn't review sooner. I've been extremely busy, and I haven't been in the mood myself to read or write. I liked it a lot. Zee was hilarious. XD. "You've probably got her yodeling all the time." LOL. I hope you'll be feeling better soon. :)

With Love,

Caitlyn

It's official. I don't need a boyfriend or husband or whatever. I have fallen in love with Juni! This story and the writing and the characters are all terrific! I Have done nothing but read this for the last two days and now I'm hooked so I do hope you put more out soon. I loved, love, loved it!

What a cliff hanger ending! I've been dying to know Juni's secretive past, even if it is probably wrong from Henry, rumors usually have a grain of truth. Or maybe he'll lie to try and get her back? Oh you are eveil, EVIl. Now, don't you start any more heart tugging stories until you put this one to bed! I mean finished. :)

Sweet. I the Henry for tryin to ruin things. There are hints of some bad things in Juni's past but he'll tell her eventually, but Henry just wants to interfere.

Squee! I love fan girls. Yeah, glass breaks and dogs run for cover, but I love the image of Juni floating in a dream balloon with flowers. I hope writing this cheered you up as well

hey dont worry about what other people say... well except me cause i think this story is AMAZING! and that this story flows so easily its awesome (cue munchkin laugh) tehehe

I read the first 30-or so chapters of your story in one go, and have been following avidly ever since. It caught my attention immediately, your style is different and new, and your characters seem realistic and (in Juni's case) utterly lovable.

I read some of your previous reviews... and I can sort of see where your critics are coming from, in Juni's case. But at the same time, you've done a great job of making him NOT perfect. He is flawed, and we see that, in how hard he works to control himself around her, and how he reacts to her in an all too human way.

And besides, the point of fiction is to take us to a place outside our world. And a world where a man like him exists is one I wouldn't mind being in.

Don't lose your real reason for writing. If it is no longer an absolute pleasure to do so, then we as readers are not giving you the credit you deserve. You're doing a wonderful job, and letting the characters...speak to you, as you do, is turning out to be a rather sensational story.

-Dreamer

Ha! That was sweet! I LOVE it and it was definitely lighthearted and you're really good because I can totally see your story written in manga style. It was that GOOD. I can see the daisies floating and the descriptions you wrote and I enjoyed it.

Was wondering about what you said in author's note. Just enjoy the story and I think people nitpicking or give suggestions because you've manage to make them care about the story too, which is a great thing! But I hope you feel better soon :) and everyone has these moments of feeling off and stressed. Hope things work out for you.

Sorry haven't been reviewing as much because writing on the phone is pretty messy for me. BUT, in response to your pm about my suggestion for lengthening your chapters, thanks for explaining your reasons and I totally understand. I really appreciate your quick updates. ;)

Feel better! *smiles*