'i'll leap into the air,

touch the sky,

and shine for everyone to see'

that really got me. great imagery of someone leaping to something greater :)

we as in

you and you

or those friends and you

i like the confusion

i feel you on this piece

oh man skating rinks

hahaha what times

I wish you could favourite individual chapters. I'm sorry that my reviews are a tad dull and unhelpful. I'm not great at expressing how a poem affects me and why and what might possibly be improved (although, perhaps things are meant to be imperfect). Your writing amazes me. I like how they can tell a whole story in so few lines and yet leave so much mystery. I also like best when you turn well-known stories or concepts on their head and make me think about it with another perspective (like the Alice or Eve poem). Jealous of that ability. My poems are just straightforward "wah I'm miserable right now" poems I think xD

Anyway. I shall stop rambling now. And you should try and get some sleep sometime :D

My God...I am so glad I stumbled across you and this poetry. This by FAR the best poetry I have ever read. You have such a way with words, and the reader can sense the pain and misery.

This chapter and the chapter previous to this were the ones that gave me goosebumps.

You are an amazing poet, and I hope you can find happiness through your words and lyrics.

- Hearts x

We're all perfectly flawed.

You have such a way with words.