|Reviews for Lemonade|
| Supernova15 5/10/11 . chapter 1
This poem seems kind of sad/somber to me more than angry- but emotions definitely come through, so that's a good thing. I feel like there are definite breaking points in the poem where you could make it into separate stanzas. Your poem seems to evolve from different views of emotion, and breaking up the different shifts would make it easier for the reader to follow. If that makes sense. I like it though, keep it up!