|Reviews for First Blood|
| Solfires Shadow 12/3/02 . chapter 1
Hmhm wow, for such little imspiration it turned out rather well. Very good poem. Im currently at a block as what to say, but ill just leave it with at this. Overall very immusing and well written poem. Good work
| Kagome135 4/17/02 . chapter 1
Whoa, nice! I once wrote a poem of the sort from the spider's POV..
| A.J.Peart 2/19/02 . chapter 1
I wrote my poem called "Death in the Arms of No One" about a ground hog that was lying dead in the path that I was hiking on behind my residence building. I thought, at first, that it was a diranged thing to write a poem about, and I even hid it from people for a while, but I realized that it doesn't matter where the inspiration comes from. Plus, death in all it's forms is a very inspiring aspect of life.
As for the poem, it's pretty good, despite your doubts. I like the suggestion of redemption at the end, which makes the whole thing a window into something other than the spider (most likely ourselves, as it was for me).
There I go, writting yet another long review! Okay, the next review will be short I promise!
| Meghanna Starsong 1/29/02 . chapter 1
SPIDERS ARE SCARWEE. *hides head under covers*
| AaZz 12/21/01 . chapter 1
kwel i guess
| MoshiMoshiQueen 12/5/01 . chapter 1
very dark! it is really good! write more!
| quynh 6/17/01 . chapter 1
yea..yea..you are morbid,,but thats okee dokes..yer gao! hehe
| Amaris 6/15/01 . chapter 1
To be honest I thought this was one of your better poems. I was gonna read your story but then the subject caught my eye. Yes, kinda morbid but what do you expect when I've known you for oh...since fifth grade-5 years. Anyways, I'm gonna read your story now. Me
| takichan 6/5/01 . chapter 1
Good beginning, the ending good use some work *-, just trying to help. I dont exactly understand the very last phrase, about the spider never redeeming the first blood 'doomed to be lost' ? iono..maybe im just slow..hehe
| Veronica Cereta 5/30/01 . chapter 1
Wow. So far this is my favorite poem that I have ever read on
| lisa 5/25/01 . chapter 1
you killed a spider
you sick , kill flies, or better yet PMS queen
but dont kill spiders
i have a pet spider its dead
i cant think of any inspiring words to say
| Ragdoll 5/23/01 . chapter 1
hey that was kinda cool...dunno why...maybe i'm also "sadistic, cynical and morbid"!
| BakebakeObake san 5/22/01 . chapter 1
Professienelesem! If you can uderstand that word, you're cool! He, I think I like this one as much as happy poem. I dunno why...Why does the phone always have to quit functioning all of a sudden? Err...the life and death thing is cool...Nahiiiii...Nba nba.( I didn't try to write NBA, mind me) I can really get inspired easily...The things that I t? I don't see any changes. The poem is all about the truth. And you made it very dramatic, too. I wish you have a nice wedding(WINK WINK _). At my house(WINKWINK!) La.