|Reviews for Tarnished Silver|
| Jody 3/12/13 . chapter 44
I just finished reading your fic and I think it was amazing. I really liked how all your characters had their fails, and how Sterling and Kendra didn't have the typical trite romance. They both had their demons that they had to overcome to be together in a happy health relationship, making it all the realer.I have to especially say that I am extremely happy that Sterling did not get with Heaven, I think and obviously you agree that Kendra is better match for Sterling.
The story is amazing and I am sad that it's over with but I guess all good things must come to an end! I look forward to reading more of your stories in the future.
| Vallen 2/8/13 . chapter 44
Thanks for the amazing ride! I'm really glad Kendra was the woman as I really liked her a lot the first time they met. I thought it was going to be heaven at the beginning which I really didn't mind until she became so fucked - I hated her. I love the way you wrote Kendra and like I said, I'm really glad she ended up being the one. I love the story. I think it's a gem and I really glad to have come across it. You are an amazing writer and you're really good with the rollercoaster. I believe there are a lot of writers who are good at writing the slopes but you're not only good at that, you are also good at making sure they don't throw the passengers/writers off.
I was seeing sterling as Joel McHale from Community, just thought I'd bring that up haha
Again thank you so much for bringing us this masterpiece, I'm a big fan and will be checking out your other work. Though I believe it's going to be really hard to top this one off.
| love your story 1/11/13 . chapter 27
the tucker bucker bo bucker.. reminded me of when my 15 year old cousin tried that on his 6 year old baby sister (me) by telling her about his friend chuck
| contrary 1/4/13 . chapter 44
Read this in one sitting and can i congratulate you on this work of art! Im not going into the things i most admire about it- the compliments are for every well written, origional story with an intricate plot and perfect ending- but the way you made te characters positions in the story start as barely noticable and shoot to the main position is commendable. I also loved how i thought this would be a story of male-is-infatuated-with-cold-female-then-gets-the- girl-they-fuck-the-end to something truly beautiful. There are so many things I loved about this novel.
Thank you for writing it.
| Guest 1/4/13 . chapter 44
GREAT STORY! I really love your writing style it has all the concepts that I love in a story. Not so subtle romance, drama, serious sexing and plenty of baggage. I love how you eased Sterling into falling in love. It was not tied neatly in a bow. You give such great detailed history of your characters. I could not help but be drawn into their lives. You have mastered taking the readers into you stories. I love the imperfect characters and their imperfect lives. I don't agree with you not liking the story as an e-book you did an excellent job writing it and i am sure others will enjoy it as well. You write with spirit and heart that is what makes you a great writer. Do not downplay your talent. I have read so many books over the years and Sterling and Sue(excellent thief) will remain two of my favorite characters. You can hang with the best of them. Keep up the good work.
| luv4jake 1/3/13 . chapter 44
Omg I loved it. I teared up at the end but that maybe a combo of the coldplay I had playing in the background as I read lol. I'm going to miss this story and the characters but what can you do? Until next time. I'm so glad you finished even though you had many speed bumps in the way such as life right? I love this story because I felt that Sterling wasn't some poetry spouting, weak, sappy, overly sensitive man he was a hot mess with issues that got buried misunderstood and funny as hell. I can't believe how much I loved his dad Harrison I'm so glad Stacy aka Sterling broke that cycle and took a chance on Kendra even after heartbreak. Okay I'm shutting up now.
| luv4jake 1/3/13 . chapter 43
Sorry damn auto correct I meant Kendra on my last review. I loved loved this chapter yay they are back together and I loved the dialogue. Sterling made some excellent points about what type of woman he wanted and I ate it all up. Until next time. I can't believe this story is almost over as a reader it has been a pleasure to read because I'm so emotionally invested in Sterling's future or life.
| luv4jake 1/3/13 . chapter 42
Poor sterling. Sometimes I want to slap kendal but she was in an abusive relationship so she has nothing good to compare what she has with our guy. I'm glad he didn't sleep with April. Until next time. Once again his dad and Linda are awesome and love him so much plus it shows.
| avidmoonstar 12/2/12 . chapter 44
I wish I had stumbled upon this story while you were writing it, just so I could encourage you that Tarnished Silver is in fact amazing. I wish you would publish it, just to show that romance stories don't have to follow that old, worn-out plot line. That's why I stopped reading best selling romance stories. I was tired of reading the same story over and over.
Tarnished Silver is absolutely refreshing. I loved that your characters were real, and the conflict they encountered was real. No one was disgustingly perfect. They didn't encounter that 'big misunderstanding' before finally making up. It was so good that I couldn't stop reading and finished it in one weekend.
Thank you for writing a story that was original and engrossing. I can't wait to check out your other work.
| luv4jake 11/25/12 . chapter 41
This chapter was so hard to read especially when Sterling was in so much pain but I loved his dad and son time as always aw.
| luv4jake 11/23/12 . chapter 40
I loved loved loved this part it was a straight aw fest js:
"If we move, will we still have a cleaning lady?"
"I suppose so; I'm not very domesticated. But if you have a different idea, I'm open to suggestions." She nibbled my earlobe gently.
"I love you." She sighed and moved from my chest, to snuggle beside me. Her leg was over mine, and her head rested on my shoulder. "You know, if I was going to marry anyone, it would be you. Please don't give up on me."
"I love you, Princess. Now go to sleep so I can work on my subliminal messages." She giggled softly, and kissed me.
"If I'm the princess, then you must be Prince Charming."
"Not even close, I'm the black knight, but the princess is still mine. Charming's a pussy, and I have it on good authority he's got a tiny lance." She laughed softly at my joking.
"Mmm, I think I like this black knight more and more." Her hand teased over me. "Definitely no problem in the lance area."
"I might remind the princess, that the knight is ever ready to draw his weapon and rise to the occasion, should there be more foes that need vanquishing."
"You are so cute. I'd love to take you up on all that weapon, rising, and vanquishing stuff, but I'm seriously wiped out." Curled up against me, she was soon asleep.
I pulled a sheet over us, and kissed her cheek. She didn't know it, but I knew some day she would be my wife. The black knight may be a scoundrel, but he knows to hold on to a treasure, no matter what.
| luv4jake 11/23/12 . chapter 39
I love this story Stacy aka Sterling is the man he is really trying even though he has no idea what he's doing its so cute.
| AnAnon OvO 11/22/12 . chapter 44
I actually cried when Kendra left Sterling TT... I mean it's so sad to him that for once he actually trusts and commits to someone else, but she quits. I can tell you I hated Kendra so much that moment, and I felt that Sterling didn't deserve to be depressed :C but it's part of the plot and it is a great story D although I felt that they were turned on at some of the weirdest moments lol.
But all in all, a very good and heartbreaking story w
Btw, Elliot seems cute and I love that name
Keep up the good writing :)
| Bibi.Love 11/20/12 . chapter 44
Really enjoyed this story, real great plot. Love the characters and how sterling has changed/grown so much. You always put a lot of thought into the characters and the plot.
Looking forward to the next one!
| Carmel March 11/14/12 . chapter 44
I am so so sorry for reviewing so late. I logged on and saw that this story was complete! You did a wonderful, wonderful job of finishing up Sterling's story, and I especially enjoyed the epilogue. It gave me that sense of closure I always need when finishing a story. I just want to say thank you for writing this, it's really been a treat to read! I am really looking forward to all your future stories! :)