Hi. I'm going to give you a rewarding gift, three lines of my opinion.

First I thought, "Oh dear."

But the emotion in me

I could not contain.

I'm thinking about what to say to you as I walk to get a plate to cover in paint. Oh dear, Mother's here.

Ta ta.

dropping your pencil. still waitin to see that. they're all really good (I checked the syllables, not that i dont trust you) and the last line: "god" haha!

a little white space to separate the poems would help, that aside, love the title, love the one about the murky water. fun.

I choose charmander! Definitley charmander! I feel famous to be included in this. :D