kin's alive! ! ! ! ! sad, karasu's blind now. since when was he part blind? will himeji get ou? are you still updatng? update soon!

Shit...im threee weeks late for a review huh? SOrry abOut that, i seem to have forgotTen about it due to finals and holidays. I have to say great chapter, everuone seems to be pissed they died and were vrought back to life...hmmm what are you plannin kado?

Lol Kins halarious! 10/10!

woo-hoo!*Gives Ghini a squeeze*

Now to hear about Raist and his feline and human 'freinds'(how they ok)

Great job as 's kick bad guy butt

My poor Karasu! (Grabs scythe, holds it high over head and bolts out of chair) "I'm coming to save you!" (Bangs into the doorpost, trips on the edge of the rug, and splats face down on the floor) "Uhhh... Still coming!"

Have I mentioned that your antagonists are totally evil and worthy of dying a humiliating death like drowning in a shallow mud puddle? Seriously, please punch them into a tree in one of your following chapters. So did anyone have to die to unlock the portal, or did the key open it on its own? Oh, and please punch Kin's beautiful mouth and knock all his pretty little teeth out. He's REALLY getting on my nerves. My poor, brave Karasu! "I'll save you!"

Nate: "ATG, you really are too obsessed with this story."

ATG: (Tries to tug scythe out of the wall) "Nate, killjoys aren't allowed in the review section!"

Update soon!

wahh ur getting better and better

im also liking kado more. and karasu D:

Zomg, they opened the portal! Ooh, what will happen? Oh man at the beginning I was super worried when they said that Ghini, Kin, and Luca were dead. It was a relief when they said that they could come back to life! Keep up the good work :)

(Whispers frighteningly in your ear...

"This is your conscience... You will stop killing off your characters... or else..."

WAAAAAAAAAH! How could you kill off three people in ONE chapter? Okay, so maybe they have a chance of coming back to life - that's besides the point! How could you use evil Urufu to destroy three loveable (albeit sometimes annoying) characters? Phooey on the seventh dimension! (Slams head on computer desk)

Oh... you left Karasu alive? (Cackles evily and rubs hands together) Does this show promise of future angst to come? (Laughs maniacally and refreshes mailbox like mad)

(Your conscience whispers) "You... must... update... NOW...!)

:D

*grabs various heavy weapons* The wolf kill Ghini? He dies!*stops* He can be saved? woo-hoo!

Uh forgot is Raist ok?

Can't wait to see what happens

Wow I can't wait for the next update! 10/10!

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i am passed out on the floor in shock

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you killed Kin! bring him back to life Kyousai!

The kids died! I thought they were just severly injured! Man, at least they can come back to life thank goodness. The girls opwning the gate...that is going to be interesting. Also, even though Kado is of my own creation, i 'm truly fearing for Himeji. Guy gives me thecreeps. Great job hime and update soon

It will be interesting to know how Himeji will act in this situation. She has shown herself quite capable of dealing with 'inescapable' challenges, and I look forward to seeing how she will manage this one. For being a mad scientist, Ojiru is an excellent antagonist. My compliments to his creator.

I look forward to the next update with great anticipation.

Great chpter, oujiro/u is a dick. Also i feel sorry for shen and the kiddies. Bad shit is happening to them

YESSS you're updating again! Love te chapters! Poor Shen! I hope he doesn't have to die..:(