|Reviews for Fifth Week|
| Lithium of Mercy 6/24/11 . chapter 3
Ooh, rabid werewolf? Zombie? Infectious disease victim? The suspense is building! I hope Dimitri is alright - I'm guessing he passed out? It's kinda sad how that's a regular occurance for him. He sounds like he could use some hobbies. Poor guy.
I love how you named the city 'Central.' It sounds like a comic-book place, you know? I'm kinda waiting for Batman to go swooping past Calvin's window and for him to be all, 'oh, there he goes again.' Or maybe it's like a place out of Resident Evil. Could there be undercurrents of a conspiracy!
As you can tell, I'm curious to hear more. Keep it up!
| Lithium of Mercy 5/28/11 . chapter 2
I already like where this is going! Your premise is really interesting - what the heck happened to those campers? I have a feeling that we're going to find out, and I can't wait. It's also really nice to see someone who is literate without being SO literate that they have to describe every single detail about every little thing - it really irks me when writers decide to draw your attention to the color of the carpet even though it has literally nothing to do with anything.
Well, either way, keep it up!
| NeverEndingMoons 5/19/11 . chapter 2
I really like this. I like the fact that it's very descriptive and your characters are just brought to life, it's so colorful. You're really good at writing! I write just for hobby, y'know? lol. But you have the potential to make it into a career. Keep up the amazing work. Can't wait for the next chapter.