:O

This was totally gripping. I can't remember if I blinked haha.

Please, keep writing more. Most people write awesome things and then get bored and dump their stories. Please don't do that. I'll faint if you do. Nah, kidding, but still, keep writing.

9.5 out of 10 :D

Interesting story. Will we be meeting any male 'Edenites' in the future? Will there be an explanation to why females usually possess more powerful abilities? It seems as if the powers of the 'Edenites' vary greatly... what were the original Eden's powers? I have a lot of questions, and am looking forward to future chapters.