Is there anything you write not great at all? In my opinion, I do not think so. You have a back for writing great stories, developing them into something that leaves the readers wanting for more. I truly enjoyed the story. The main character is superb, even if at to,es I thought it was too good to be truth. She reminded me of Yumi from foundation of roses, she gives so much and asks for so little.
As per grammatical errors, I think I only saw one or two in all your stories, that is very refreshing to a reader. Even some published stories have more errors than I care for. Thank you for writing.

This was my second time reading this, and won't be the last. I don't think I saw a single grammar error. A character's major attitude change was caused by a major situation. No single character is a cookie cutter character. In closing, you rock!

:D RAN-CHAN! I MISS YOU! :) hahaha your break over yet hahaha

You don't own Denny's? I'm so disappointed... ;-)

Great story. Had a lot of fun reading it. I doubt it's high on your list for continuation but I'd still like to see Kenji and Himeko together! ;-)

As always, I look forward to your next project with barely contained excitement!

Just *happened* to go on 50% off the next week. Right... ( wink, wink, nudge, nudge)

;-)

Awww, little Ran-chan in growin' up! This really is such a sweet story. I'm having a whole lot of fun reading it. I'm glad you came over here since you do well with the freedom of an original story.

Hopefully Himeko and Kenji get some time together. :-)

So far, so good. It's strange working backwards since you really have improved over the past year and a half. Still, I am enjoying this a lot. I do find the nods to MSGM amusing. :-)

So far, so good. Definitely can see the anime roots here. You've gotten better at character development since this, but I am already feeling empathy for Ran without feeling hit over the head by it. You always do such a good job of walking that line up front. I'm going to be very interested to see how this develops. :-)

I have to say, this is the second time around I'm reading this one and I'm happy to say that I honestly enjoyed this story a lot. I congratulate you for writing a charming and beautiful story.

- Doc

Happy endings. :D I hope you write more stories sometime, I'll be sure to check em out. ;P I actually can't believe I've read 100k words in only a few hours. xD Laters!

-grins- I like this chapter. :D

LOL. Chikane. xD

OMG LOL. I can't believe I guessed right. xD Shiori and Ran hmm? Gotta sleep now tho. :P Be back laters! Though school's startin soon which means it'll take longer than usual to finish this story. But I WILL finish it! :D

Ran is so fricken smart. o_O Like you! ;P Considering you're the author!

Oh! and btw, are you a runner? You seem to know what it's like. :D and forgot this too: Ran as a name? Really original. :P - I already knew her roommate would be awesome.