wow this is pretty interesting read. This one made me a bit sad, but I can relate. P.s. thanks for reviewing one of my works be sure to read more of yours as well soon.

Awww, you've described the situation very well. Good job overall! Write on!

Anna _

i really liked this one. The first thing i noticed about this was how realistic and relatable it was. Then, i noticed how this was written; great detail, interesting plot, and good choice of words. Honestly, i love your work! Keep it up :)