Interesting

Haha, never knew rocks have feelings. great work on the story, especially when I didn't know that rocks could have such feelings. I mean they are just rocks.

The story about the family kinda reminds me of an act from a play that I have watched. It's like "guess, guess what they are doing" and the actor goes on to explain on the scene.

I really love good descriptives this I could say it is fine. liked the description about the female rock