This seems very personal, probably about two very specific people in the world. Yet it conjured in my mind some of my own personal memories, of a time when I played one of the roles in this poem. When I read this poem, I sense in the narrator warmth, closeness, but also just enough distance to create mystery and wonder and stir up anxious desire. Well done.

'Sometimes you need to let things fall apart for better things to fall together.'

I liked this. I thought it was good and straight to the point, almost as if you're writing in present tense.