|Reviews for i have to|
| writemystorywithoutink 7/4/11 . chapter 1
This seems very personal, probably about two very specific people in the world. Yet it conjured in my mind some of my own personal memories, of a time when I played one of the roles in this poem. When I read this poem, I sense in the narrator warmth, closeness, but also just enough distance to create mystery and wonder and stir up anxious desire. Well done.
| non.graceful 5/20/11 . chapter 1
'Sometimes you need to let things fall apart for better things to fall together.'
I liked this. I thought it was good and straight to the point, almost as if you're writing in present tense.