Great descriptive words used throughout this whole piece. The last two lines are astonishing.

LOVE the fourth stanza!

These words stir something within me, that I find difficult to express. Yet, somehow, this does not frustrate me.

"and you like knowing that you're not hollow"

love the imagery here.

The last stanza makes the entire thing. I wasn't too crazy about it at first, but then I got to that stanza and my mind went from "muh" to "Holy Shit this is good!".