|Reviews for Enigma|
| Lithium of Mercy 6/22/11 . chapter 2
Another interesting installment! I think I like Rae. It seems nice. And so does Kip.
Good job on the imagery - I could picture the eye enigma perfectly. It was pretty icky and creepy. No sleep for me tonight, I guess - I don't wanna have nightmares about that thing.
My only suggestion is to maybe add a bit more descriptions to changes in surroundings - I was a little confused by those. But even so, this is very engaging, and I can already tell I'm gonna like it. Great job!
| SynThePriest 5/22/11 . chapter 1
I hope you write more to this. It's a great beginning!