OMG, this is so exciting. Now I can't wait to read it.

I don't understand how pieces like these aren't as popular. I'm sure everyone's seen the typical story that gets over 200 reviews, but has so little content and is so mediocre. That's the thing with good things, I guess. Beautifully written.

this was absolutely breath-taking. the whole story was beautiful-their story. i could almost feel the pull they had on each other. and your words were incredible. just god. it's amazing. thank you for sharing this.

That was confusing and completely unlike antything I have ever read. Usually if I came across something like this I'd quit reading it but this story captured my attention almost immediately. You did an amazing job with it.

AAAAAAAAAwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, yaysies!

Thank you so much for putting this story out there, it was amazing and I lvoed the chapter of all dialogue it was awesome!

Best story I've read in a very long while, it was unique and AWESOMELY AWESOME.

So thank, for being so awesomely awesome.

Love Girl

An ending like that deserves a sequel! I'm glad they got together.

That is one hot kiss.

Thisis the best coincidence, ever.

A touching reunion

LOVELOVELOVE

It's so raw and incredibly real.

I really like this story. It has such a unique writing style, and even though I don't particularly like romance, I'm impressed by how realistic the characters are and how naturally they interact. You can tell that it's good writing when you can sympathize with them without reading tons and tons of character description. Keep up the good work!

OHMYGOD THE SEXUAL TENSION. :D:D:D:D:D:D

PLEASE UPODATE SOON. I CANNOT STAND HOW CLOSE THEY ARE YET SO FAR AWAY FROM EACH OTHERRRRRR.

:D

FANTASTIC JOB AS ALWAYS!

oh my goshness.

You are an amazing author and that was just super awesome!

Seriously, like if this were in person i would be speechless. As it is i just have a little pause between each sentence written whle i slowly and uncertainly regain conscious thought.

Totally a gushy review, but I dont care. Thank you for gracing fictionpress with this most epic story. )

this really is brilliant! :D It's really good, and I like Emma's character. sounds like someone I know who's artistic and everything. _ brilliant, absolutely brilliant. _ good job! do continue soon!

I looooooooove this story it's written in such a new refreshing way to write!

Please let Emma answer the door!