Very pretty, despite a darkness underneath.

La la la looove it!

I can relate to the beauty and poetic appeal of death. You precisely captured the forbidden urges and thoughts that are associated with death. "Impalement" is another great word that just rolls playfully off the tongue. see ya

ps. You should watch the movie Jenifer's Body if you haven't alredy it has the same kind of appeal.(just a recommendation)

Really beautiful. I love your poems they could go on forever and I'd just keep reading and I hate poems!