This was good but i have something to ask. Whats with the random letters at the end?

Awww... :( I can't wait for more! lol

This is really good so far. :)

OMG I LOVE IT! i am going to use this for my drama class presentation! i mean if its alright with you... i really hope that it is :) ok im going to stop talking...well typing cause im really hyper right now and im afraid i'll scare you :P anyway this was AWESOME!

I loved this and u must carry on with this one! it has much potential

once again i loved it. You have talent in script writing

Katie