|Reviews for Give me reasons to live on|
| kloun mannequin 5/25/11 . chapter 1
this makes me think people always have a half.
| Reel Wander 5/25/11 . chapter 1
Nice, I like this poem
| too.much.of.water 5/25/11 . chapter 1
Well I thought that was really lovely.
I'm new, but there seems to be a predominance of sort of pointless, almost juvenile poetry on this website.
But yours was, for a start, grammatically correct. Which is always a plus.
And I also thought that the lines: You were afraid of death; but also afraid of the terror life gives, was very clever and paradoxical.