lol i loved that, this was funny lolz _

no your lying to me you made this in five minutes what the hell

you made this brilliance in 5 minutes no no no i cant believe you

this is horribly good is there going to be a chapter 2 cause it

would be great if there was maybe a bit longer anyway brilliance

i almost hate you for how you wrote this brilliance in 5 minutes

even though im still sure your lying to me anywho thanks for the story

Thank You Nyaa

Wow...I bet your friend WAS majorly pissed. But this was...uh...creative. I mean, I don't think I can say anything bad about it, because there was nothing wrong with it, per say...

I fear for your sanity, though. That's not a bad thing, don't worry. That was just so different than anything I've ever read, I can definitely say that.