Finally got to read your last two chapters and they were amazing as usual! Keep up the good work :)

Thanks for updating. :-)

You have no idea how glad I was to see that you've updated! :) I've been dealing with some hardships and a very persistant cold for a couple of weeks now and I feel horrible!

It was your longest chapter so far? Am I right? It was such a delight reading it! So much information! I kept being surprised with every line I was reading.

I hope Julian's research was only what he said it was and he din;t just lie to Felicia... I hope that for his own sake... Felicia can be quite aggressive when she wants to. lol

The meeting of the twins with their dad was intense! I kept thinking that out of nowhere Adam would just pounce on his dad and beat him to a pulp! Thank God, Jez was there. She proved once more the truly great person she is. I feel like they should talk more with their father... maybe Jez will ask for another meeting in the future while planning her revenge? I don't know what to think about their dad... he sounded and seemed sad and tired and sick, but is he truly penitent... truly repetant? I don't know. They all need more time together to talk. Maybe he asked for his kids to inform them about Patrick's dad and his parole hearing... maybe he wants to make amends this way. We'll see.

And Jezebel! Wow! Her dark self surfaces bit by bit with every single day going by. And this dark self... is it a dark self or is this how she should be all along? Dynamic and badass, ready to face all her enemies? You did an amazing job in this chapter with this issue.

And I just love how everything falls into place... how everyone's connected to each other and the twins. Cecilia is a vile person... she deserves what's coming for her... I hope Jez can kick her ass personally! The moment where she thought she saw Quinn in Jez's form was excellent!

And I bet, that the person who is threatening Nathan and Jez's life is somehow connected with them as well! I think that somehow this someone will catch up on the twins at the summer house...

and their time at the summer house... gee! I get excited just by thinking about it... although I have a bad feeling about this... I keep thinking that everyone will be there and something big will happen. We'll see I guess.

And Julian subtly hinting to Felicia about Adam being in love with Jez... I wonder if Felicia has any kind of knowledge or feeling about this and she just chose to reassure Julian for now, or she truly doesn't know anything and she just believes that Adam is a justified overprotective brother. Veeeery interesting!

Now, you got me all excited and I cannot wait for the next update. :)

Julian's back! Excelelnt! I was wondering about him. It was surely interesting reading about his thoughts and interaction with Felicia. I love her! She's so badass! lol

I'm surprised to see Adam still allowing Jez to ride her bike, but I think that even if he didn't like the idea, with the new Jez around, there wouldn't be a lot of space for argument anyway. Hahaha She better tell Adam about the meeting with her father soon, or she never will and if that happens, I have a very bad feeling about this.

And what is this new thing about Nathan and the stolen heart? I was surprised to say the least. I guess everyone's got some old skeletons in their closets after all.

It was another surprise to read about Quinn's past and her friendship to Amy's and Felicia's moms. I mean, everything and everyone is carefully connected to each other, aren't they? That might be a clue or an important link to solving the mystery. But it's still too early for me, I think.

And the evil witch Sophia is back! Bleeehhh! I was dreading this moment, but I'm glad she came on a time when Jez is stronger than ever. Perhaps this time, she can really take care of the bitch! And I bet she will side with that scumbag Patrick.

However, you left us with another cliffie. :( Now, I'm dying to know what is going on with the heart and all. Cause I bet that the person behind the whole mess has something to do with the heart.

P.S.: I loved how Jez started being more confident, more dark, more in tune with her dark self and even a bit more... hmmm... having darker, sensual thoughts about a certain someone. :)

I don't like this Sophie girl... But Amy is amazing!

I love your story and all the twists

Great work _

Great work as usual... Loved seeing Jez getting stronger and defending herself _

And you're back! :)

That was an excellent chapter... although you left me wanting more, thinking this is a kind of a cliffie. An evil one, too! lol

I was blown away with the way Jez faced all of the people at church. She was a totally different person and I liked the new her! I also liked the appearance of temptation aka her dark self. She started having those seconds thoughts about her feelings or the changing in them towards Adam... oh, the drama that will ensue. *sigh* I cannot wait. Literally!

And Adam being drugged! Wow! And I'm sure it had to do something with that strange white haired guy! I love Fee's comeback! I like her to bits! Something tells me she will play a very important role in the future. And what about her boyfriend? He's the one who saw Adam and Jez kissing. What about that? Does Fee know? Questions, questions...

And really, Jez wearing leather and riding bikes? Hahaha In the future she will be the one to protect Adam and not the other way around! She also wants to confront her faher. Hmm... I don't know. If he's still the same pathetic, psychotic man he was, then maybe this is not such a good idea. It might be good for her soul though to do that. I believe Adam should know about it and be there with her. Yes, she's a whole new person now, but let's not forget she carries old wounds. It might be wise if she wasn't fooled or rushed by this newfound strength. She will need Adam by her side.

I had to go all awww when I read about the rings. It was such a touching moment! And you had to end it? Not fair! When will you update again? :( You should know, I'm old. Waiting can actually kill me. Really. :(

Dear Jasmine,

Let me say this as a retort, I don’t care, One no I am not in religion, two I am writing this because I AM FREE TO DO SO, and three if you hate the story so much then don’t read it and don’t comment, also I am admitting I do not know the history of it or how things are properly done, also as another comment I am not the only one who has written or are writing such stories and honestly and if I hurt your belief in god do not take it out on someone who is doing this for fun, and really, take a flying leap for all I care, this was done on my own time, with my own imagination and if YOU think I’m disgusting or so on then wake the hell up.

Everyone is damn well different.

Thank you, have a nice day bye bye,

Oh and PS if you are going to try to say such bad things to a writer you know nothing about, learn to spell.

T

Dear Jasmine,

Let me say this as a retort, I don’t care, One no I am not in religion, two I am writing this because I AM FREE TO DO SO, and three if you hate the story so much then don’t read it and don’t comment, also I am admitting I do not know the history of it or how things are properly done, also as another comment I am not the only one who has written or are writing such stories and honestly and if I hurt your belief in god do not take it out on someone who is doing this for fun, and really, take a flying leap for all I care, this was done on my own time, with my own imagination and if YOU think I’m disgusting or so on then wake the hell up.

Everyone is damn well different.

Thank you, have a nice day bye bye,

Oh and PS if you are going to try to say such bad things to a writer you know nothing about, learn to spell.

P.S.S It was also mentioned in the BEGINNING of what this was about or did you think of it as something else?

T

I just happened to stumble upon this, and let's jut say; I was thoroughly apled and disgusted. I couldn't even finish ch. 2. First. I hope you're not a catholic, bc if you are, you must have the worst catechesis ever. This story perpetuates stereotypes of the Church, and you're ignorance of Church tradition, and the vocation of the priest hood is a little disturbing, seen as you attempted to write a story on it. Thank you for perpetuating the steryotypes about priests and Catholics.

Tarynne This chapter is pretty good and has much fewer grammar errors.

What story was it you wanted my to read? I cant remember. :(

Anyways you should send my your personal e-mail so I can help you out with the grammar errors and I replied to your school e-mail.

aww and here I thought this was gonna be a good story.

What! Her father? He called her straight on her cell? I don't think I like the way this sounds or it even goes. Adam needs to know about this. I can understand ehr reservations about informing him about something like that, but she is making a big mistake. I hope to God, I'm mistaken... trully. :(

And the snake is back, coming between them now... damn this temptation! Jez is so sensitive. Indeed, she has gone through a big change into this somewhat self confident and dynamic young woman, but she still carries a lot of baggage. Adam might be overprotective, but trouble is constantly following her everywhere. It's a difficult situation.

I still love the way they're both dealing with what happened between them a few days ago. Each dealing with it their own way, but resulting in the same awkwardness.

Sam was a delight to read. "Well, Foo!" I laughed so hard at that line! And Adam's reaction... "I'm straight" Gee, Father... we got it... you like the ladies! Hahahahaha

It was sad seeing Jez ruining her painting. Could that be a subconscious reaction to her very secret, very possible, very scary attraction she has towards Adam? The second thoughts she's been having about that dream? Could she ever bring herself to suspect that it wasn't a dream after all? So many questions...

The punching bag with the pic on, was a classic. *thumbs up* Amy is funny and well, Amy is Amy, but what exactly does she think when she says things like "you two look good like that"? I'd like to see her point of view on the siblings.

What can I say? I have a thousands questions about Patrick, their father, Sophia, Felicia's boyfriend who saw them kissing, Susan and her husband... Literally a thousand questions! But, I'll be good and stop nagging you. *good girl*

I loved the chapter. Is it my wishful, gutter mind thinking, or are things between Adam and Jez changing? Hmmm... ;)

While everyone else who wrote about 'brother-sister' love made their stories look cheap you had succeeded in turning your story into an artistic work! I love your story and can't wait to read the next chapter!

Keep up the amazing work :)

I can't believe I didn't review this chapter! Sorry about that!

As usual it was a great chapter!

You did an amazing job :)