I love this story, even if I don't understand Boxing lingo. Love your writing style.

really enjoyed it

and once again french help :)
Be quiet! : tais-toi!
I do so much to keep your secret, and you tell everyone. Why? : j'ai tout fait pour garder ton secret et tu le dis à tout le monde. Pourquoi?
No,we keptthis secretfor so long. You hadno reasonto tell anyone. Do not make excuses. : Non, on a gardé ce secret pendant si longtemp. tu n'avais aucune raison de le dire à tout le monde . N'invente pas des excuses .
I do so much for you. All I wanted was for you to be my daughter who was pretty and popular. Why would you do this to me?: j'ai tellement fait pour toi. Tout ce que je voulais c'est que tu sois ma fille jolie et populaire. Pourquoi m'as tu fais ça?

hello
your story is really great the only trouble is that your french look like you have use google translation (wich mean that your french is full of mistake)
so i've tried to correct it (hope you're not thinking i'm putting my nose were it shoudn't go)
Let me pass! Laissez-moi passer !
" Calm down? Are you crazy? You told him?" "Me calmer? T'es folle? Tu lui as dis?"
If something goes wrong, you will be hurt. You'll be sad if you are discovered. si ça ce passe mal tu seras blessé , tu seras triste si tu es découverte
I cannotbelieveIcame all the wayhere justtosolvethisproblem. je ne peux pas croire que je sois venue jusqu'ici juste pour régler ce probleme
voilà for this chapter , I have done my best but just so you now "vous" is only use in a formal or "respectfull" way (like speaking to your boss or in court or if you are doing a regency novel :) )
hope i didn't bore you

I just finished the story... It was amazing! I loved it!

No problem! I'll try and check your new story out ASAP :D asheepiage.

Wow. This story is amazing. I absolutely loved it!

I wasn't able to read for the past few months because I got really busy. And now that I have free time, I finished it in less than a day!

I hope you continue to write. :) (Time to read When Elements Collide. Mwahahahaha!)

-Amy Stardust

AWW I LOVED IT! You did an amazing job with this story! :) Thanks for writing, xoxo

I like both story ideas, but I vote the princess one!

I really find Story 1 so you should do that one.

This story was so was the perfect distraction from studying that I needed. The only negative thing I can think of right now is that the chapters were too short, I wanted to read more.

this is the first story i've read in all fictionpress and i loved it! its soo nice :))

Loved your story but i'm sad it ended! Dang it! But it was really good Keep writing and ill keep Reading! :{D

I like the princessstory, but I like Untitled more. And maybe keep the title that. It sort of goes with the story. Like he's the Untitled person.

That was an awesome story. Every Friday or Saturday, I always looked forward to reading a chapter. I like how the main character is different from the typical main characters for stories. Anyway, great job :) As for the new story, I vote for The Proper Pirincess