Don't mind me. . Just sobbing like a baby. :'( I loved this.

It's so sad.

I love the emotion in this piece, you've done a good job of capturing the hurt.

I noticed a few times you changed tense, which broke up the flow and got a bit confusing at some points.

But over all it was a good read.

You said it was based on real events; I hope that you're okay.

And writer's block really sucks.