Tyler is too sweet. Literally D: Where can I buy one?

Ah dear :( Layna, there's all sorts of nasty stuffs you can get from being cut on glass in a dingy car park :(

Pmsl Jess makes me lol xD

'Can anyone say awkward?' OOOOO me! I can! I can Layna! Pick me! Awwwwwkkkwwaaaarrrrddddd. I can say it with that sarcastic voice n everything :D

Lmao, footsie war! xD

Zomg.

xmintayyyyy

I wanna find out what Jess is up to! xD

That 'ohshit' moment xD

'"I'd hate to interrupt your shouting match, but I'd like to know more about this Tyler guy," Kyle said causing me to freeze.'

Pmsl xD

'"God damn it Layna will you forget that you're annoyed at Jess and maybe me as too and just see things reasonably!'

'me as to'? ;)

Aww poor Kyle :(

xmintayyyyyy

I only justed started reading your story, and I want to let you know I really really like it!

Good luck with college. :)

Good luck with college!

for chapter one here is a mistake I found: Any way as I was saying but for you rudely interrupted me," he tutted

Do you mean to say: Any way as I was saying BEFORE you rudely interrupted me," ? And what is "tutted"?

Besides those minor mistakes everything was good! :D I like this story, and Tyler is soooo cute! :) Keep up the good work!

-JustPeachy333

xoxo

Three days goes by fast, FP. Seriously, quit logging me out! Jeez.

It's alright, taking a long break on the story might help a little. Writer's block is the worst. :( College is more important though, so it's good that you're focusing on that. :)

And in this chapter of YAMDA, her majesty Layna will be giving out free life lessons! ;D

I sighed and looked back at Tammi. "It seems like you're the only person in this house without some sort of drama going on Tams."

"Think of it from his point of view,"

Lol. I thought for a moment Tammi spoke... awkward xD

Enjoying the story still ;D I like the little copyright symbol ;)

'Hey, you! We can turn it upppp' They are mine.

Sadly, they still aren't, but if you google that line, you'll know this is me. Even though it's signed as me. But I'm not gonna go MWAH-MINTY-MWAH again,cus that's boring. Yes, i have had coffee... ttfn! xD

Great chapter (Yes I'm on this account instead of the Cehsja one again, just easier... it's still me :p)

Glad that she's getting help now and I think it's great Kyle went to see her. PS: I used to love the movie Fly Away Home haha, but it's been YEARS and YEARS since I've seen it now.

Wow, your characters are out of control! Kyle talked to his mom! Lol, very nice update. Hopefully this means they're getting closer to making things cool between their mother and them. Keep up the good writing. :)

Wow, this chapter was amazing. Kyle is so funny and a great character to have in the story. Gotta love older protective brothers ;)/ And tyler is so what wil happen next... Update soon!

Psht kit kats. If only we were allowed something so tasty. .

Yes, hope does suck. Nothing good ever comes from hoping in my experience .

Wow, slow down Jessie, I struggled to keep up and I'm just reading :P

lololololol best solution ever: leave it blank xP

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-mintyyyyy

Just have to say, I love how you regularly refer back to 'You are mouth droppingly amazing' xD

Saw a few little errors, like 'too' rather than 'to' and 'suprised' rather than 'surprises', but that's just picky :L

Nawww sweet Tyler x3

You're right, Chris IS awesome xD

Interesting talent ;) Yes, SPEAK TO EACH OTHER D: STOP DODGING THE SUBJECT ALREADY .

-mintayyyy

yay daddy's home D

Psht, Layna you idiot. if it was bothering you that much just hear what the boy's got to say -.-

Sweet chapter though x3

Although, Thal and Layna, you shouldn't walk your dog straight after they've eaten ;)

xxmintehhhxx

I love thunderstorms so much :) The description of it was great and I loved the line "I haven't dropped you since you were two" too funny.

PS: Sorry it took a bit longer to review this one, I've been a bit busy lately.