Oh my gosh I'm sooo glad I found this story, you are such an exceptional writer.! This story is so fantastic I just wanna curl up in bed and have no one bother me til I'm done(which is exactly what I did.) Now that I'm at the end I need more please keep going girl. I'm definitely going to be sticking to this story til the end.

TIA is pissing me off and so is Jackson. Ughhhh mind your own business, Damn!
On a happier note thank you for updating this chapter was wonderful. I have a feeling things are gonna get complicated with Derrick and Trina. I hope he doesn't hurt Char.

wow you are a powerful writer!

weeee Derrick is love him
i was so happy when he kissed her infront of Jackson
i wonder what is wrong with trina ?
thanx so much for updating !

I really enjoy the pace at which this story is going and I salute you for developing these characters in such a brilliant way. I loved the fact that Derrick kissed Char infront of Jackson good for him... and what the hell is Trina up to she is a little suspicious to me. Anyway continue doing your thing I enjoy this chapter very much. p.s dont take so long with the updates thanks

OMG! I hate Tia, I knew she was gonna cause trouble sooner or later! And that Jackson guy, smh. But this chapter was really good! I love that you showed us Char's thought process about pursuing something with Derrick and it wasn't just like bam! he just told me he's violent racist but i'm just gonna act like i never knew that. I'm also really happy that Derrick apologized to Trina, I don't know what her deal is though with her new weird behavior lol. Having said all that, I'd like to say that this story is awesome, one of the best I've ever read! It might not have the popularity or following that it deserves but there are loyal readers like me that look forward to its updates so much, you have no idea! So please don't be tempted to push it to the sidelines every now and then because having to wait for forever for this update seriously sucked!

she gave in waaaaay to quickly after his story. i mean come on! as i was reading i'm like ' i know they are not making googley eyes and are about to kiss! ' and that is exactly what happened. the ending of this chapter was disappointing.

Like it very much :D. Can't wait for the next update.

Please please please update soon! These last two chapters were incredible by the way :)

HI there, I just wanna say I love your stories, been a huge fan since your first story. I truly enjoy reading each chapter and can't wait for the next update. Each new chapter of yours is always so captivating,makes me so eager for the next one. L really love your stories. Thanks for sharing it with us )

Oh wow wow wow really good plot and story and exceptionally well written. I felt what they felt every intense moment and I loved every word of it. I hope you find the time to write more soon.
XO

No wonder you had to split that into two parts. That was an INTENSE chapter.

perfecto

Hmmm...Don't you think Char accepts his past rather too quickly? Felt she would hav rejected Derrick first and then later realizing he had changed?..Just a thought..

I'm loving this story!