LOVED it, could totally see it happening. i shall now browse your other stories.

Don't be so hard on yourself! This is an awesome story! At first, Calvin was a completely cringe-worthy date. But, he surprised me! I really like this story and I can't believe it only has 2 reviews! (minus this one, of course). Really great story )

It's NOT cringe-worthy, it was cute! I mean it's not perfect, you clearly have talent though. And your write grammatically correct. And the characters are interesting. Really, be proud of this! It's not bad at all.

hm. cute. is this complete? it's adorable & i'd hate for it to end when there is so much trouble for them to get in -

it's been a while since i've read some original fiction from you, dahlin'. do more.

& because it had to be done,

Christ, stop posting such self-hating notes at the end of your stories. They're not bad.